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HE WAS SHY!
EMMANUEL OJEX

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He didn’t know how to…it wasn’t his first time but he didn’t want to mess it up. She was exceptionally beautiful today, and he wanted to close a perfect date with a kiss that would last forever.

They’d been friends for 3 years now. It took all of him to ask her out.

He was plotting the perfect moment in his head but gave up the idea as they got to her place.

She understood him perfectly, drew his shirt—he was never really good with emotions, she closed her eyes and it became a moment none of them would forget.

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    Emmanuel Ojex

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