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Welcome to my chamber!
Of motionless choreographer,
We aren't guilded by rules,
But protected by determination.

Our bathroom is the fire,
The poisons is our food,
Death are our pals,
Courage is our breathe.

In my chamber,
Red means go,
Green means stop,
But we don't walk on ground,
We soar in the sky.

Every second we fight,
Don't be surprised we hardly smile,
But behind one smile,
There is a million tears.

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