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Thousands drown
In the village of tears.
Millions pass on
In the hunt for flesh.
Yet they yowl
for the deaths 
like movies 
In their sight.

Like ping pong,
They toss the lives of men
Back and forth 
On the table of life
Brainwashing men
To fight illusions(hope, solution.)

Instead of wielding power,
It flows into their body
Like HIV 
            Which evolves to AIDS
It takes over
                           their minds.
Their minds 
          are with them
But  not      controlled       by 'em.


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    I'm Ajeh Goodluck by name (also known as Styles) born in the month of August, 2002. I'm from Delta state but resides in Lagos state, Nigeria. I'm a gamer and a poet. I started writing poems in November, 2018. I was inspired to write poems by a group of friends and I've been writing ever since.

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