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I need to dialogue the Nigeria independence.
of her impotency and cowardice.
that is taking her children to slaughter.
One after the other at the death idol alter.

For to live in harmony has become a treason.
Because we kill one another for no reason.
To eat with our hands has become a problem.
To breathe peace in the nation a great problem.

My cries have thorns strongly serrated.
I trust on Saudi Arabia to adore it,separated.
When night visited our beautiful hut.
They turned us to being severely burnt..

A friend with peppery mouth I trusted.
to blew peace into my aching eyes.
But he becomes thief in the night.
And got my eyes off its socket, aborted.

See lots of dropping dreams getting destroyed.
What plant will they yield and grow.
The old,the young,thin and thick lacrimate sorrows.
We want a mechanism for enough to get employed.

When us the time to sleep without snoring ?
And the time to cry without shedding tears ?
When are we to work laboriously without a drop of sweet ??
When are we to live without ageing ??

Roaring Nigerian Lion at its prey sight.
Having claws of minerals to fight.
Her cowardice left her stomach heavy 
Till when will our skin be pilled like orange ??

If we cry softly softly, when will the agony in our cries be heard ??

Ariyo Ahmad
Gent soul

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    My name is Ariyo Ahmad from owode yewa,Ogun state , born in the year Dec 9,1996. A male by gender and a native of Abeokuta, Ogun state.

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